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ตัวอย่างการเขียนวิเคราะห์กราฟเส้น writing task 1

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart depicts the information about the consumption of various kinds of meat products in Europe over a 25-year period from 1979 to 2004.

Generally, chicken consumption increased to a great degree while beef and lamb consumption moved otherwise. It is indicated that although beef was highly popular in the earliest year, it was overtaken by chicken in the end of the time scale. The unit was measured in grams per person per week.

To begin with, the consumption of beef stood at more than 200 which was the largest consumption in 1979 as opposed to that of chicken with just below 150. Interestingly, the former reached a peak of just below 150 by 1984 before decreasing to around 200 which was similar to the latter figure in the next five years. Nevertheless, the trend in beef dropped until the end of the period, whereas the trend in chicken went up enormously until it hit to more than 250 which was the highest amount in the year 2004.

One the other hand, although lamb was the second most notable at first with 150, it dramatically went down and hit around 50 while fish did not highly favor with the figure about 60 and its trend remained stable until the end of the period.

TA – 7

CC – 6

L – 6

G – 6

Overall 6.5

Comment: Candidate addresses all parts of the task and presents a clear overview. The information is arranged with clear progression, however, cohesive devices (linkers) are at times faulty or mechanical and the task lacks referencing (this, that, these, those, such). The report contains a sufficient amount of range in vocabulary and uses some less common words. There are still some errors in word formation but this does not prevent communication. There is a variety of both simple and complex structures and errors in grammar do not reduce communication.

The chart depicts (inappropriate for the task, should use shows or illustrates) the information about the consumption of various kinds of meat products in Europe over a 25-year period from 1979 to 2004.

Generally, chicken consumption increased to a great degree while (punctuation, “comma” before while) beef and lamb consumption moved otherwise. It is indicated that although beef was highly popular in the earliest year, it was overtaken by chicken in the end of the time scale. The unit was measured in grams per person per week (should be in intro)

To begin with, the consumption of beef stood at more than 200 which was the largest consumption in 1979 as opposed to that of chicken with just below 150. Interestingly, the former reached a peak of just below 150 by 1984 before decreasing to around 200 which was similar to the latter figure in the next five years (unclear referencing). Nevertheless, the trend in beef dropped until the end of the period, whereas the trend in chicken went up enormously until it hit to more than 250which (punctuation “comma” before while) was the highest amount in the year 2004.

One the other hand, although lamb was the second most notable at first with 150, it dramatically went down and hit around 50 while (punctuation “comma” before while) fish did not highly favor (faulty grammar – passive needed) with the figure (missing preposition, at) about 60 and its trend remained stable until the end of the period

The diagram below gives information about the number of parcels delivered by two major mail services companies from 1920 to 2000.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the number of delivered packages by the two most popular mail service enterprises over the period of 8 decades.

Overall, although FedEx was the most common in the earliest year, it was eventually overtaken by TNT at the end of the period.

To begin with, the quantity of parcels delivered by FedEx started fairly high at 15,000 which was three times higher than that of TNT at just more than 5,000. The former trend dramatically went up to just below 25,000 before it slumped to roughly 10,000 after twenty years. Surprisingly, at that time the trend of the latter became relatively similar to that of the former to more than 10,000. It is interesting to note that after 1960, FedEx transaction obtained a high of about 17,000 before it was overtaken by TNT service in 1990 with a figure that was incomparably high as opposed to that of FedEx with just below 20,000 the end of the time scale.

Free time activities of the elderly in the United States spent in their free time between 1980 and 2010

The graph below shows how elderly people in the United States spent their free time between 1980 and 2010.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph depicts the percentage of various activities which senior citizens spent on their spare time in the USA over the period of thirty years.

Overall, four sorts of recreational activities, which were reading, hiking, watching TV program and surfing the internet, had an upward trend. On the other hand, merely the figure for going to theatres dropped.

To begin with, watching television was the most common activity in the earliest year, which showed more three-fifths per cent and about two-fifths per cent higher than that of hiking. The former moved increasingly to 70% before going down approximately 65% in 2010s. Meanwhile, there was an enormous growth for the latter which eventually reached a peak of four-fifths per cent in the end. Furthermore, minority of American senior citizens preferred navigating websites which accounted for about 5% in 1980s, after which it significantly hit a half in 2010s. Besides, reading was the free time activity that elderly spent time on it at 20% at the beginning; however, the figure doubled at the end.

The remaining activity stood up at a half which was the second most famous activity among the others; nevertheless, at the end it plummeted less that 50% which was likely uncommon.

The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the changes in the natality and fatality rates in New Zealand form 1901 to 2101.

Overall, at the beginning, the birth rate doubled twofold of the death rate; nevertheless, it is predicted that the death rate is going significantly to be higher than the birth rate in 2101.

The beginning period showed that birth rate stood at more than 20,000 which was two times higher than that of the mortality rate, which was responsible less than 10,000. There was a dramatic rise of the former after 1941 and its figure had reached the peak of approximately 64,000 in 1961, after which it had widely fluctuated for forty years from 1961 to 2001. After 2021, it is forecasted that it will slightly decline. On the other hand, the latter moderately grew up to about 35,000 in around 2020. This is estimated that from 2021 to about 2051, the death trend will rocket to roughly 60,000. This is followed by a level off and minimal drop at around 55,000 in 2101.

The graph below shows the population figures of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph depicts the total number of turtles, namely, Leatherback turtle (19), Green Turtle (38), all species (111) and Olive Ridley turtle (20) in India form 1980 to 2012.

Overall, the population of turtles began in a similar percentage. However, the figure of Leatherback turtles had a dramatic downward trend, whereas Olive Ridley turtles were the most significant in the end.

In the earliest year, all species of turtles stood at 100%. The ratio of Olive Ridley turtles soared to reach a peak of almost 140% in 1997 before it fluctuated until the end which was the largest proportion among others and responsible for about more than 130%. Besides, there was a minimal growth for all species throughout the time scale.

On the one hand, the percentage of Green turtles minimally dipped and also fluctuated until about 2000 before it levelled off at around 90 from 2001 to2004. This was followed by a slight increase and suddenly dropped to be  the third rank. Furthermore, the ratio of Leatherback grew markedly to around 110% in 1987 before plummeting to roughly 60% at the end.